Something a little different this month
My Submission for the Commonwealth writers short story.
The Last Rain maker
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The Last Rain maker
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Regards,
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin
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Re: The Last Rain maker
My notes!
Since you’re submitting this, I did run through of spelling and grammar fixes with track changes on. Feel free to ignore any that are deliberate narrative decisions.
Since you’re submitting this, I did run through of spelling and grammar fixes with track changes on. Feel free to ignore any that are deliberate narrative decisions.
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Re: The Last Rain maker
Sorry about that. Here is the full comments.
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Re: The Last Rain maker
Hi Darren,
I've added comments throughout the document, plus overall feedback at the bottom. Great story. All the best with the comp.
Katherine
I've added comments throughout the document, plus overall feedback at the bottom. Great story. All the best with the comp.
Katherine
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Re: The Last Rain maker
Thankyou
Regards,
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin