Hi all,
Sorry, this is also late. I did try on Monday, but there was a system issue - and thanks Darren for fixing that - and then the week got away from me.
I'm working on a new short story (still in the early editing phase, after finishing the first draft on the weekend), which I'm keen to submit to fantasy magazine (when a lot more polished) - even though the chances are so slim, as we know. But, worth a try.
Look forward to chatting!
Speak soon, Kane
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Re: Dark and Swollen and Hungry
HI Kane,
That really caught me off guard, what an interesting idea. I am intrigued to find out what Barb actually is. I pictured like a dragon or wyvern but you mentioned the tuff of hair. The scene is really well contracted, graphic, without being graphic. Looking forward to talking more about it tomorrow.
That really caught me off guard, what an interesting idea. I am intrigued to find out what Barb actually is. I pictured like a dragon or wyvern but you mentioned the tuff of hair. The scene is really well contracted, graphic, without being graphic. Looking forward to talking more about it tomorrow.
Regards,
Darren
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Re: Dark and Swollen and Hungry
Fab!
See comments in doc.
Katherine
See comments in doc.
Katherine
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Re: Dark and Swollen and Hungry
Thanks Kane for an enjoyable read - I've attached your doc with my comments. Good luck with publication and let us know when it happens!
Bron
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