Outline - Machu Picchu
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DazWizzle
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Outline - Machu Picchu
I know this is a little late but here is my outline.
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Regards,
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin
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KaneW
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Re: Outline - Machu Picchu
Thanks, Darren.
I was very interested to see how the story was going to unfold, but part of me didn't want to spoil the ending, haha - as I've been enjoying what you've been sharing to date.
The eureka moment is GOLD - love it.
The incident is clever too.
I also like the conflict between Keri and Leo (about replacing Ross's memories involving Elena), and the new understanding found (in ch 52).
Have you worked out which POV you're telling the later chapters through? Do you have a rough word count (total) in mind? Are you using a story structure for overall plotting (e.g. the three or four act structure)?
Catch you on Sunday.
Cheers, Kane
I was very interested to see how the story was going to unfold, but part of me didn't want to spoil the ending, haha - as I've been enjoying what you've been sharing to date.
The eureka moment is GOLD - love it.
The incident is clever too.
I also like the conflict between Keri and Leo (about replacing Ross's memories involving Elena), and the new understanding found (in ch 52).
Have you worked out which POV you're telling the later chapters through? Do you have a rough word count (total) in mind? Are you using a story structure for overall plotting (e.g. the three or four act structure)?
Catch you on Sunday.
Cheers, Kane
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BeeMore
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Re: Outline - Machu Picchu
Hi Darren,
It was good to get an overview of your novel to see which direction it is heading, I think it will be helpful for future feedback. It's a unique and intriguing idea and I'm looking forward to reading more.
I've put some comments at the end of your attached doc.
Bron
It was good to get an overview of your novel to see which direction it is heading, I think it will be helpful for future feedback. It's a unique and intriguing idea and I'm looking forward to reading more.
I've put some comments at the end of your attached doc.
Bron
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