Hi all,
Here's the second instalment of Tupla. The first bit needs more work, I think - it gives more background to one of the two main characters, but I'm not sure that I've got it right. Any comments on anything very welcome, and my apologies again about the delay in posting. (Previous comments from you all were very helpful and made sense, thanks!)
Bron
Tupla 2
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KatWolf
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Re: Tupla 2
Hi Bron,
Thanks for the read. I've added a few comments to the doc. I will chat to you about the overall at tomorrow's meeting.
Kat
Thanks for the read. I've added a few comments to the doc. I will chat to you about the overall at tomorrow's meeting.
Kat
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DazWizzle
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Re: Tupla 2
Hey Bron,
Really enjoyed where this is going.
I'll see you shortly
Really enjoyed where this is going.
I'll see you shortly
Regards,
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin