PERILS OF THE PAST - pt3

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KaneW
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PERILS OF THE PAST - pt3

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Hi all,

Please find the next chapters of my manuscript attached, with a short recap at the start.

Looking forward to catching up this weekend.

Cheers, Kane
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DazWizzle
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Hi Kane,

My notes, more just a few questions and observations.

Chat saturday
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Darren


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Kane, this is great! Compelling to read; you've done a good job dramatising the "aftershock" scenes.
Some further comments and questions attached in your doc.
See you tomorrow,
Bron
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