Please find chapters 1 and 2
I cant remember if I posted this up before here, If I have this is the latest version
Origin of Warewolves 1-2
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DazWizzle
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Origin of Warewolves 1-2
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Regards,
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin
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KaneW
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Re: Origin of Warewolves 1-2
Darren, this is brilliant! It's amongst your best work. Probably my favourite piece from you so far.
Such a great start. Action. Banter. Some fantastic lines. Loving it.
Small comments and tracked changes attached.
Chat soon.
Kane
Such a great start. Action. Banter. Some fantastic lines. Loving it.
Small comments and tracked changes attached.
Chat soon.
Kane
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BeeMore
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Re: Origin of Warewolves 1-2
Thanks Darren - I love your ability to world-build, and the concept of essence magic is intriguing. Your scene construction is very skilled and I could visualise exactly what was happening as the action propelled me along. Keen to read more!
I've made some further comments and suggestions in the doc.
See you tomorrow,
Bron
I've made some further comments and suggestions in the doc.
See you tomorrow,
Bron
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