Hi all,
Please find the next chapters of my manuscript attached, with a short recap at the start.
Looking forward to catching up this weekend.
Cheers, Kane
PERILS OF THE PAST - pt3
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PERILS OF THE PAST - pt3
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Re: PERILS OF THE PAST - pt3
Hi Kane,
My notes, more just a few questions and observations.
Chat saturday
My notes, more just a few questions and observations.
Chat saturday
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Regards,
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin
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Re: PERILS OF THE PAST - pt3
Kane, this is great! Compelling to read; you've done a good job dramatising the "aftershock" scenes.
Some further comments and questions attached in your doc.
See you tomorrow,
Bron
Some further comments and questions attached in your doc.
See you tomorrow,
Bron
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