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The Last Rain maker
Posted: Mon 12 Sep, 2022 2:32 am
by DazWizzle
Something a little different this month
My Submission for the Commonwealth writers short story.
Re: The Last Rain maker
Posted: Sat 17 Sep, 2022 4:24 pm
by ARL
My notes!
Since you’re submitting this, I did run through of spelling and grammar fixes with track changes on. Feel free to ignore any that are deliberate narrative decisions.
Re: The Last Rain maker
Posted: Sun 18 Sep, 2022 2:12 pm
by ARL
Sorry about that. Here is the full comments.
Re: The Last Rain maker
Posted: Wed 26 Oct, 2022 6:30 pm
by KatWolf
Hi Darren,
I've added comments throughout the document, plus overall feedback at the bottom. Great story. All the best with the comp.
Katherine
Re: The Last Rain maker
Posted: Thu 27 Oct, 2022 5:14 pm
by DazWizzle
KatWolf wrote: ↑Wed 26 Oct, 2022 6:30 pm
Hi Darren,
I've added comments throughout the document, plus overall feedback at the bottom. Great story. All the best with the comp.
Katherine
Thankyou
