The Last Rain maker

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DazWizzle
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The Last Rain maker

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Something a little different this month
My Submission for the Commonwealth writers short story.
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Darren


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My notes!

Since you’re submitting this, I did run through of spelling and grammar fixes with track changes on. Feel free to ignore any that are deliberate narrative decisions.
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Sorry about that. Here is the full comments.
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Hi Darren,
I've added comments throughout the document, plus overall feedback at the bottom. Great story. All the best with the comp.
Katherine
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KatWolf wrote: ↑Wed 26 Oct, 2022 6:30 pm Hi Darren,
I've added comments throughout the document, plus overall feedback at the bottom. Great story. All the best with the comp.
Katherine
Thankyou 😁
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Darren


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