Hi all,
Here's the first few chapters of my novel draft, and sorry to have posted so late, but I wasn't sure whether Sunday's meeting was going ahead until the other posts popped up. Glad it is still on!
Thanks, Bron
Tupla - a Novel - first instalment
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Tupla - a Novel - first instalment
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Re: Tupla - a Novel - first instalment
Hi Bron,
Was excited to start reading your novel.
Very interested in where the scam email thread goes! The hints about the main character are brilliant - can't wait for the payoffs.
The manuscript also has me intrigued.
Some comments in the attached.
See you Sunday.
Cheers, Kane
Was excited to start reading your novel.
Very interested in where the scam email thread goes! The hints about the main character are brilliant - can't wait for the payoffs.
The manuscript also has me intrigued.
Some comments in the attached.
See you Sunday.
Cheers, Kane
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Re: Tupla - a Novel - first instalment
Hi Bron,
I quite enjoyed the start, the manuscript is an interesting addition. I will be interested to see how this ties into the whole story.
My only bit of feedback was with the email. She emailed the Lawyers email address, but got the response from the person in the hospital. I understand the whole scam side of it so I am also interested to see how this ties in too. Also eating the body of the mother caught me a little lol.
Talk tomorrow
I quite enjoyed the start, the manuscript is an interesting addition. I will be interested to see how this ties into the whole story.
My only bit of feedback was with the email. She emailed the Lawyers email address, but got the response from the person in the hospital. I understand the whole scam side of it so I am also interested to see how this ties in too. Also eating the body of the mother caught me a little lol.
Talk tomorrow
Regards,
Darren
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Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin