Hi, I've been working on this new story that I'm about a third of the way through. It's very unrefined (I've only just now given it a title!), but I look forward to your comments and overall thoughts.
Thanks for your time,
Katherine
Falling Between Crows - Ch 1.
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KatWolf
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Falling Between Crows - Ch 1.
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BeeMore
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Re: Falling Between Crows - Ch 1.
Hi Kat,
Impressed by your first instalment, comments attached and looking forward to discussing tomorrow.
Thanks, Bron
Impressed by your first instalment, comments attached and looking forward to discussing tomorrow.
Thanks, Bron
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DazWizzle
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Re: Falling Between Crows - Ch 1.
Hey Kat,
Really enjoyed it. Only take away from me were the first sentence it very long.
Only other thing that caught me off guard, was the font change.
Looking forward to catching up tomorrow,
Darren.
Really enjoyed it. Only take away from me were the first sentence it very long.
Only other thing that caught me off guard, was the font change.
Looking forward to catching up tomorrow,
Darren.
Regards,
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin
Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin