A fun little short story
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A fun little short story
Just a short 1.5k word story I wrote a bit ago that I’m pretty proud of.
Looking forward to meeting you all and getting to read your work.
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Re: A fun little short story
Thanks, Rafe. Yes, you should be proud of this one. It's awesome. Really inventive. Certainly a fun read!
I put down my reactions as I read as comments - please see attached.
Chat this weekend.
Cheers, Kane
I put down my reactions as I read as comments - please see attached.
Chat this weekend.
Cheers, Kane
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Re: A fun little short story
Hi Rafe,
I also really enjoyed this story.
An imaginative use of metaphor to explore real world paradoxes.
Sending some suggestions in the attached doc and looking forward to discussing further tomorrow.
Cheers,
Bron
I also really enjoyed this story.
An imaginative use of metaphor to explore real world paradoxes.
Sending some suggestions in the attached doc and looking forward to discussing further tomorrow.
Cheers,
Bron
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Re: A fun little short story
Hi Rafe,
Interesting little story. Kinda had me feeling a medieval vibe until you mentioned chatroom's. nice twist for the ending.
Interesting little story. Kinda had me feeling a medieval vibe until you mentioned chatroom's. nice twist for the ending.
Regards,
Darren
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Darren
"The poop was me... Sorry. In my defence, I've never had the poop talk before" - Jaime
"I am no longer engaging in the mermaid poop conversation" - Karin