A fun little short story

[RKaplan]

Rafe - The Devil's Salvation.docx

Hi Everyone,
Just a short 1.5k word story I wrote a bit ago that I’m pretty proud of.
Looking forward to meeting you all and getting to read your work.

[KaneW]

Thanks, Rafe. Yes, you should be proud of this one. It's awesome. Really inventive. Certainly a fun read!
I put down my reactions as I read as comments - please see attached.
Chat this weekend.
Cheers, Kane

[BeeMore]

Hi Rafe,
I also really enjoyed this story.
An imaginative use of metaphor to explore real world paradoxes.
Sending some suggestions in the attached doc and looking forward to discussing further tomorrow.
Cheers,
Bron

[DazWizzle]

Hi Rafe,

Interesting little story. Kinda had me feeling a medieval vibe until you mentioned chatroom's. nice twist for the ending.